Peter Hansen


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A (very) quick sample of my work

Original: 99 words

In the United States, child abuse was first identified as a major issue when in 1962 C. Henry Kempe conducted a survey and found out that in eighty-eight hospitals, there were some 302 children who had suffered some injury as a result of abuse and were termed “battered”. This for the first time brought the problem to the forefront though there had been some other studies before this too. The public was aware that child abuse was present but that it was present in epidemical proportions was it came to know with the publication of the research by Kempe.


Edited: 76 words

In the United States, child abuse was first identified as a major issue in 1962, when a survey by C. Henry Kempe found that in 88 hospitals, some 302 children had suffered some injury as a result of abuse, and were termed “battered.” There had been previous studies, but Kempe brought the issue of child abuse to the forefront for the first time, and helped inform the public that it was a problem of epidemic proportions.


Note: The original text is a short excerpt of a sample online term paper that I chose at random. I'd be happy to provide more extensive samples of my work if you'd like.

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